My goodness, this was such a good read! If you are considering doing more chapters I’d love to read them. I feel there is so much more that can go on here! Do Clint and Aeryn fall in love, do they save the galaxy, does the Galactic Council trust them? Why is the Ruin Bringers invisible to Humans, could it be the pact? Will Humanity keep its word, surely there would be a split! AHHH so much could go on here! Man the ancient humans must have been pretty Awesome Horse Camp Half Blood Long Island Sound Shirt. That one word from one human is enough to make them leave. My current theory is that humans are also invisible to the Ruin Bringers but because they could “build anything” they figured out a way to see them via technology.
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Nice, I feel like there used to be a subscribe button somewhere, apparently linked to Reddit Enhancement Suite but I don’t have the option anymore even though I do have the Enhancement Suite. There are a few things that can give it an Awesome Horse Camp Half Blood Long Island Sound Shirt. The Ruin Bringers seems to be a name without a lot of punch to it, for starters. You could develop it more. Like with things of biblical nature, it would be fun for such an event to be referenced in the religion of the race that first encountered them. Just like the Flood would have a meaning with us, the Ruin Bringers could be something of equal value to them. I hate how Reddit works on my mobile, so I will update this later.
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That’s a really good point. Yeah, when I was revising it over the weekend, I realized that I gave more character to Nygel than I did Clint and an Awesome Horse Camp Half Blood Long Island Sound Shirt. Well, Clint is the hero, in essence, his actions can bring out his character more than just describing him. Ticks and behaviors are also strong ways to create subtle character and development. The best course of action is, of course, show don’t tell, and in writing that can be pretty difficult, but not impossible. Show his actions, but not how he feels about said action. The audience can piece it together from bits and pieces. His train of thought can be revealed, but not his feelings. We can figure it out ourselves.